tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-848620772908416660.post8201128582077544573..comments2024-03-05T22:56:35.116+08:00Comments on A Kindle in Hong Kong: Writing Video: Second DraftShannon Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17375300716238391523noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-848620772908416660.post-77445841040600960682012-02-27T20:57:15.775+08:002012-02-27T20:57:15.775+08:00Thank you Giora. I've loved seeing the differe...Thank you Giora. I've loved seeing the differences between the drafts. This was a few months ago, and it's amazing how much I've done to the manuscript since then. Good luck to you too!Shannon Younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17375300716238391523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-848620772908416660.post-91001407549423972412012-02-25T10:08:37.073+08:002012-02-25T10:08:37.073+08:00Congrats, Shannon, for finishing the second draft....Congrats, Shannon, for finishing the second draft. Hopefully, your readers will give you good comments to incorporate in the third draft. The query letter and the first 5 pages are the key to move further. Good luck!G.M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02652216131823877445noreply@blogger.com